Great things take time

Great things take time!  

I hope I get better at writing.  I want to be able to be a great writer just like  J.K Rowling. In order for me to be  a  fantastic writer I have to be organised, work hard and practise so that I can achieve my goals. It took J.K. Rowling more then five years to plan and edit her first book.  If I want to achieve my goals I have to work as had as J.K. Rowling.

J.K. Rowling sold  450 million copies. J.K. Rowling wrote very good story called Harry potter. Before she gave it away she checked  her mistake. It took a very long time for J.K Rowling  to write books.It was about around  five or more years for her to write books. The reason J.K Rowling took time is that she wanted it to be perfect so people read it and don’t say this person has done lots of mistakes. J.K Rowling is a great book writer.

If you want your writing to be perfect you will have to plan your writing , edit your writing check your writing , draft writing   and  you will even take time  to  practise too.

It’s important to take time because if you don’t and you have published it and people read it they will leave you a comment saying  "Hi a like you story but it has lots of mistakes I hope you try next time". That might happen to you.

The main message is to take time when you do things.

Burger paragarph

My Burger Paragraph :)

In a paragragph you will need these things:

A Title - A title is the name of a story of what you are writing about.

Introduction - An Introduction is the main idea.

Sentence 1- Is the first thing you are going to write about.

Sentence 2- Is the second thing you are going to write about.         

Sentence 3- Is the thrid thing you are going  write about.

Conclusion- Is the last one, conclusion is the part at the end that sums up your paragraph or how you felt.

My vision board goal’s
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 1.Sport  I want to play netball.

2.School I want to stop talking on the mat.

3.Friends I want to be a better friend.

4.Maths I want to be brave and work hard at my maths.

5.healthy body I want to be fit and strong and eat more healthy food.

6.writing I want my hand writing to be better.

7.Reading I want to  get better at my reading.

8.Family I want to be a better person in my family.


Love :)                       Dad :)                            Mum :)

Ice-cream :)                 Lolly pop :)                    family :)

happy  :)                     sun :)                            LoL  :)  

  The play was about Duffy and the best book in the world.
My best part I like was when scruffy was trying to catch the book.
The best characters  I liked was  Scruffy, Duffy, Emmy, Wiremu, Marvel and Mr page.
The main message was read books.

Healthy eating

Healthy food is fruit, vegges, lots of water, milk, biscuits, crackers, and more. Healthy food is so tasty and  good for you.


Why do we need to eat healthy ? So we can get  healthy, strong and fit and have healthy bones too.  

Recipe for an awsome Pt.englander.

Ingredients:

1.Respect

2.Take charge

3.Responsible

4.Be kind

5.Finish it off properley

How to use ingredients:

1.Respect-Respecting your teacher and friends.Respecting your teacher and yourself by doing your work.

2.Be kind and don't teaze peoples names or hurt them.

3.Take charge and listen to the teacher.

4.Be responsible and do the right thing.

5.Be responsible on your netbooks.

My hoilday

Hoilday highlight.

On a hot summer day my family and I went to the pools.What we did first was got ready to go then we had beakfast then we went to go cach the bus.We finally got to the pools in panmure .My family was very excited. We got change and put sun cream.Then I jumped into the pool it was cold but I still like it so I moved around and I got warm then I had some food. Then we went on the hydroslide lots of times it was fun.Then I went into the outside I swam and swam then it was time to go that was when I was sad but I had fun then we got change and went home.